I can hear the pattern obviously looping in the first 30 seconds. Don't know if anyone else will notice.
Bass in the second half of the song (IMHO) has too much treble in it and isn't positioned "down".
The last minute or so is completely random. Is it a good or a bad thing? I dunno.
But it was an awesome track. So much emotion in the beginning and the midsection made me laugh. Really awesome. And my headphones didn't explode. So much spaciousness. GG.